Sunday, November 28, 2010

Final

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4 comments:

  1. Wow! These came out awesome! Great Job!

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  2. Design Congratulations? You did na excellent job!! These are great ideas – interactive, uncluttered and well designed. You have really thought through your idea and worked on your ideas and layout so they visually communicate well/
    1. Product The drawing on the children shoe is very playful. The cut out like opening a washer is great – perhaps a little too big, and would take a bit more testing to find a solution. As the time goes on and you start to see the implications of the opening page, you could have put the other side of the washer on the inside. The text is working and the use of the 3 primary colors references children – very strong colors. Perhaps the notion of the too much color could be a compromise. Good use of interactivity – would have to use the rubber to stick it down – or perforated.
    2 Industrial the note pad – something that can be used by the sales attendants – reusable, like the shoe. Also following the interactivity of the advertisements. Good layout – 4 colors 4 notes and the placement on the page is finally working for you. Free notepad I can take it – could put notes on it about the shoe that you learn or give it out to the client. Your photoshop skills are getting soo much better
    3 Branding Again in line with the interactivity of the advertisement – the playfulness of tic tac toe follows the kids shoe idea yet a bit more complicated in idea and layout– the continuity with the kids idea yet it is not dominant, so you can appeal to a wider audience. Lighter color of text and logo if you are using such saturated colours, I prefer the ones on the web. .
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    1 Product They are obviously for children – primary colors as a unification yet they are designed for the parents. The continuity of using interactivity make them seem a group although you are looking at different target markets, They are simple clean and informing. In your roughs I do like the softer pastels - a little less bold - which helps refine the design. You have defined and met your target market and this is reaffirmed with your ad placement.

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  3. Design Congratulations? You did na excellent job!! These are great ideas – interactive, uncluttered and well designed. You have really thought through your idea and worked on your ideas and layout so they visually communicate well/
    1. Product The drawing on the children shoe is very playful. The cut out like opening a washer is great – perhaps a little too big, and would take a bit more testing to find a solution. As the time goes on and you start to see the implications of the opening page, you could have put the other side of the washer on the inside. The text is working and the use of the 3 primary colors references children – very strong colors. Perhaps the notion of the too much color could be a compromise. Good use of interactivity – would have to use the rubber to stick it down – or perforated.
    2 Industrial the note pad – something that can be used by the sales attendants – reusable, like the shoe. Also following the interactivity of the advertisements. Good layout – 4 colors 4 notes and the placement on the page is finally working for you. Free notepad I can take it – could put notes on it about the shoe that you learn or give it out to the client. Your photoshop skills are getting soo much better

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  4. 3 Branding Again in line with the interactivity of the advertisement – the playfulness of tic tac toe follows the kids shoe idea yet a bit more complicated in idea and layout– the continuity with the kids idea yet it is not dominant, so you can appeal to a wider audience. Lighter color of text and logo if you are using such saturated colours, I prefer the ones on the web. .
    Content
    1 Product They are obviously for children – primary colors as a unification yet they are designed for the parents. The continuity of using interactivity make them seem a group although you are looking at different target markets, They are simple clean and informing. In your roughs I do like the softer pastels - a little less bold - which helps refine the design. You have defined and met your target market and this is reaffirmed with your ad placement.

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